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graceviolet) wrote2012-04-24 10:35 pm
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story; Unnecessary Distraction (Julia/Arianna)
So for my Dreams in Fiction Writing class...we had to write an erotic dream sequence. Yeah, I know. And to be completely honest, the first idea that popped into my head was a Julia/Arianna fantasy dream (I've been writing a lot of stories for class in Julia's perspective...it's really fun/interesting writing in her POV).
Oh and Troian Bellisario is Julia Simmons...sooo yep. :)
But the thought of writing a sex scene (let alone a lesbian sex scene...i didn't want to screw it up!) terrified me...so I had my roommate, Kara,
write a lot of it. So she wrote quite a bit...then I finished it.
Ugh...I think it's terrible (minus Kara's part) but whatever.
She wrote from: "Julia leaned back in her bed and felt her head sink in her pillow." to "Julia gently kissed Arianna neck in response." and then I changed a few words here & there to make it sound like I wrote it..haha.
Enjoy! (tell me how bad it is!)
Julia Simmons trudged upstairs to her bedroom, stepping on each step on her family’s mahogany winding staircase rather loudly; almost as if she was a elephant stepping on helpless little ants. She didn’t know why she had been so angry these past couple of weeks, she just had. Perhaps, it’s just my “time of the month”, Julia thought to herself. Julia knew that wasn’t the reason. She knew the real answer was a secret so deep and dark, she just could not and would not admit to herself. But these recent feelings were starting to fester up inside her. It was as if she was a tea kettle that was suddenly screaming in a high pitched whistle.
When Julia reached her door, she immediately set her red floral printed messenger bag on her hardwood floor and plopped down on her sky blue comforter.
She had much to do over the past couple of days. There was cheerleading practice which she was the captain for, massive amounts of homework in every class subject, and lately, her possible romantic feelings for the new girl in school, Arianna Cromwell.
Julia leaned back in her bed and felt her head sink in her pillow. She began reflecting on her day. Her mind wandered, thinking of school and the busy schedule that awaited her this upcoming week. The drama at cheerleading practice had been troubling her but lately that was the least of her worries. Lost in her thoughts, Julia took a deep breath and slowly closed her eyes. As Julia felt her head begin to clear she could not help but think about Arianna. It was always the little things that caught Julia’s attention. The way Arianna walked. The way she brushed her blonde hair back behind her ear. Every move Arianna made was effortless. What Julia admired most about Arianna was that she was truly herself and no one could get in her way.
Julia shifted turning to her side and in one swoop of her right arm embraced her bright blue bed spread. The material crumpled underneath her arm and she took another deep breath. Drifting into lucid dreaming, Julia suddenly felt a light touch on her arm as though it was a graze of a hand. It felt warm, caring, and most of all…right. The touch moved to her face, brushing away her hair and slowly moved down towards her chest. Julia’s eyes opened slowly only to see Arianna’s blue eyes. Julia had already known it was her. The world for a moment felt simple as if the two small and delicate people lying on the blue bed comforter were the only ones that were important in this god forsaken world.
Julia’s head moved towards Arianna only to be met with a soft and gentle kiss. The kiss felt like an explosion of fireworks to Julia and as the kiss continued it felt more and more comfortable, more and more right. Julia unbuttoned her bright pink cardigan, one button at a time and Arianna unzipped her forest green skirt. The skirt slid down Arianna’s legs and suddenly there was no barrier separating them. They clinged to each other as they kissed. Julia and Arianna felt as though they were one. Julia felt Arianna’s hand move down her body from her shoulders, to her stomach, and felt her pants unbutton. Julia’s heart skipped a beat as she felt Arianna reach underneath. Julia gently kissed Arianna's neck in response.
Julia did not want this feeling to end. This feeling of closeness, this feeling of pure bliss. She felt if she died right now, she would be the happiest girl in the world.
Arianna began to send a trail of soft, warm kisses down Julia’s body. From the nape of her neck all the way to below her stomach.
Julia gasped at the overwhelming emotions she was feeling. This was unlike anything she had ever experienced before. She wish it would never end.
Julia tightly gripped her headboard. A sudden jolt of electricity shot through her. At least that what it felt like.
Julia’s entire body felt like it was going to explode. She knew what was going to happen.
Just when Julia was really enjoying this sexual encounter with the girl of her dreams, she quickly woke up from her very obscure yet very exciting dream.
Julia now knew that these feelings for Arianna Cromwell were never going to go away. A part of her hated this fact, but there was another part of her that wanted to embrace it.
Oh and Troian Bellisario is Julia Simmons...sooo yep. :)
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omg.
ALSO GET IT GURL. I love Julia ahahaha.
I thought it was great!! (much better than my sex scenes).
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My prof read some short stories of erotic sex scenes/dream sequences in class & the entire class was basically cracking up because they were either really ridiculous or so bad...
Good...I'm glad! :)
I'm actually having a REALLY fun time writing in Julia's perspective! She's awesome.
Really? Well you can thank Kara...she wrote the majority of that. :)